I didn’t plan my first novel. I had an idea, scrabbled to get it down and then hit a snag: I could’t quite get one plot point to happen the way I wanted it to. So, I stepped back, planned out some possibilities and completed the first draft with a flourish.
Now, I’m revising it all. I struggled so much with the first chapter; getting the tone right, making my protagonist sympathetic, starting just at the right point…I’m happy with the way it stands now. I’m confident that I’ve got the right first chapter to my novel. But – and this is a big but – what to include in Chapter Two?
There is a wealth of information on how to approach that initial chapter and tips for making sure you’ve included all the right elements. I’ve read what feels like all of them (yet is probably just a fraction). And here I am, having succeeded with my first chapter now stumped by Chapter Two.
Fortunately I have managed to find one (Yes, read it and weep people: 1) particularly thoughtful blog post on what we writers should consider for our second chapter content. Thank god for Beth Hill and her post on ‘Where should a Second Chapter start?‘ She has some very astute points that has reaffirmed my recent inkling that I need to introduce my sub-plot before I delve too far into my main story.
I love her advice that we need to draw the reader away from what they expect. As soon as I read this titbit of information I realised just how frequently I’ve seen this done in other books I’ve loved. The author starts you on one path, seduces you into caring and then…they introduce something else. Because I so desperately want to know what happens next I speed-read through chapter two, only to find that when I finish reading this bit I’m even more invested in the story than ever before; nothing will stop me reading now.
That is what is so great about Beth’s post. After all the Chapter One advice I’ve felt bereft when it came to tackling Chapter Two. But now I feel armed and ready to jump right into it and have some fun developing a sub-plot that could potentially be just as exciting as the main thread.
Bring it on, Chapter Two…
What about you – what are your tips for Chapter Two content? Do you wish there was more out there about this oft-neglected challenge of keeping your reader enthralled after Chapter One?
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